Sunday, July 5, 2009

The First Paragraph!

Here is the first paragraph of Dangerous Diary:

Chapter 1: A Mystery on Hand

One night I was looking though my mom's old dusty almost never touched chest in the attic. It had spider webs everywhere and it had so much dust, you couldn't see the real color of the box. I opened the old chest to see what was inside it. I saw a photo of my mom as a 10 year old, a bag full of empty old Diet Coke bottles, and a diary, with a pink cover and a silver lock. I looked around for the key but it wasn't in the chest. So there I was with a wondering mind and an sealed diary. I scoured the attic but found nothing, but then I saw some- thing in the untouched corner. I crept towards it hoping that it was harmless. "Squeak!" the floor said with every step I took just wondering what was in the corner. I blew and the cobwebs of the spiders and the dust that had been sitting there brushed away. There, in the corner was a dull, bronze, key that had just been sitting there as if wanting to be found, but was unable to, until now.

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